2/28/10

Review on Katie MacAlister's Steamed

Katie MacAlister's books are a staple of any romance lover's collection. Her stories cover various sub-generes, contain actual plots in addition to the romance, and are told with characteristic situational and conversational humor. Even her young adult novels, written under the name Katie Maxwell, are guaranteed to make the reader garner strange looks when read in public places due to the near constant laughter they induce.

Steamed, her latest novel, does not disappoint, although she has tried multiple things that are not her standard; specifically the alternating first-person perspectives and the exploration of a different sub-genre.

The novel opens in a modern day quantum physics laboratory, with Jack Fletcher narrating as his sister thoughtlessly plays with a canister of liquid helium while informing him that she has set him up with a friend who shares an interest in steampunk (a genre of Victorian-ized sci-fi). Jack cares less about the prospective date than the probability of an explosion, which accordingly ensues, opening a new scene from the perspective of Captain Octavia Pye, who finds the pair passed out in the cargo hold of her airship in an alternate - you guessed it - steampunk dimension.

Octavia's characterization is perhaps the best part of the novel, at least in terms of Katie Mac's development as an author. With her formal speech and subtle phrasing, she is a strong, pragmatic heroine who provides the straight-man partner to many of the more zany characters and situations in the novel. Her voice is quite distinct from Jack's, especially towards the onset of the book, though the two start to blend towards the conclusion. For those readers who loathe the love-at-first-sight scenario, Octavia's cool reason as she analyzes her attraction to Jack is absolutely refreshing. However, when it is revealed that Octavia too is a traveler from our dimension, it screeches with hard friction against her initial response to the explanation for her discovery of Jack and his sister, Hallie, on board her ship.

Jack Fletcher, though not as consistently drawn a character as Octavia, is at least an interesting addition to the story. He initially appears dressed in a t-shirt marked "Airship Pirates," providing the first nod to Jack Sparrow of Pirates of the Caribbean; his whimsical nature and whole-hearted pursuit of half-baked plans gives the second and third nods. Though we are told that he is a Quaker, and that he is not necessarily a very devoted Quaker, his responses to conflict are unpredictable, often violent but sometimes pointedly pacifist. This was likely an attempt to provide ironic humor, but it ends up being simply contradictory, much like our initial impression of Jack as a modest man and his later portrayal as jealous and cocky, speaking in poetic/cliched exclamations in regards to Octavia.

The constant switching between their two perspectives is accomplished through the presence or absence of a Captain's log. The main problem with this method is that never once in the exceptionally detailed log book does it mention Octavia's keeping of said log book. But, at the end of the novel, when Jack and Octavia's voices become more difficult to differentiate, it is exceedingly useful to the reader, though the device should have been excludable entirely. However, at least the method is consistent with the aether-driven universe that MacAlister portrays.

The unique setting is one of the main reasons that Steamed is so enjoyable, as it provides a fun and adventurous plot to counteract the necessary "corniness" of the genre. The steampunk world is rife with wars, emperors, and revolutionaries, including the arbitrary and sometimes horrifying acts that accompany such things. Within a few chapters of Jack and Hallie's arrival, Hallie is arrested by the Emperor's agents as a spy, and it is up to Jack and Octavia to find some way to rescue her before she is hanged. This leads to run-ins with the radical revolutionary forces, battles and kidnappings by the agents of the encroaching Moghul Empire, and our hero and heroine having sex... in a secret passageway adjoining the Emperor's bedchamber (Oops!).

Though certainly not high literature, Steamed is well-worth the read in terms of laugh-out-loud entertainment.

2/23/10

Review on Erin McCarthy's Mouth to Mouth

Erin McCarthy's work is usually typified by her witty, quirky heroines and the absurd situations they find themselves in. She builds strong plots, sometimes out of everyday situations, and sometimes out of specific subcultures (vampiric politics and Nascar racing are two examples). When smut occurs in her novels, it serves a purpose and advances the plot in addition to being both plausible and entertaining.

Mouth to Mouth has none of these characteristics. The heroine is Laurel Wilkins, a moneyed deaf woman who is generally shy and cautious, but wishes to have a wild affair. Her main contribution to the story is either as a victim of white collar crime or a body cavity to be filled during the frequent and gratuitous sexual interludes she shares with the over-protective police officer investigating the crime. Interludes which, despite an occasional gem of imagery, are uninspiring, but somehow lead the pair to fall in love. It is clear throughout it all that McCarthy has little sympathy with either character, as both come off stilted and a tad caricatured throughout. Any natural flow or humor to be found comes from either Laurel's mother or the side pairing, which McCarthy transitions to and from with awkward jolts. The overall effect is the feeling that one is reading a cliched romance novel - something that no reader wants to experience.

However, the book is not without some merits. It is perhaps one of the best portrayals of obstacles to love that McCarthy has ever written - the emotions that lead the characters to resist falling in love are realistic to their situations, with Laurel struggling with her need for independence versus her desire for the over-protective and sometimes over-bearing hero, and the hero, Russ, dealing with a conflict of interest posed by his desires for his family and the blossoming relationship. It is the two being in love that the reader has difficulty swallowing.

The supporting characters are also bright spots in this novel. Sean, Russ's little brother, is a plausible representation of a teenaged boy who has just lost his parents, and although there is perhaps too much disparity between Laurel's perception of her mother and the way she comes across to the reader, Beverly Wilkins is also strong, with a distinct voice. The villain of the novel introduces some elements that are never fully explored, but is consistent and plausible as a character, and ultimately brings about the conclusion of the novel, ending the tortuous and smut-ridden courtship between the main characters, who, of course, live happily ever after.

But these things are not enough to carry the novel, especially if one is accustomed to the higher quality of romantic literature that Erin McCarthy normally produces. Quite frankly, if this was the first novel she had written, she would not be a published author. It lacks all the richness of plot, character development, message, and voice that the title 'literature' demands, failing to deliver more than the barest gleam of entertainment.